Haiku: shower

~ shower ~

small beads of dew fall

caressing, ever downwards

washing away stress

 

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~Richard

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    1. Thank you for your comment, Yang.
      I originally used the word “cascading” but changed it to “caressing” as I like the idea of the intimacy that this word implied. Haiku is an deceptively devilish form of poetry as every single word conveys meaning. I do appreciate your perspective; thank you for taking the time to comment.
      Best wishes, Richard

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